E8

__ Collaborative Writing __ __ Group 8 ____﻿__ At Home with My Brother My mother was going to the supermarket. I was scared of staying at home alone with my brother. After that, I was in my bedroom doing homework. “Help!” I heard a shout coming from my brother’s room. I rushed to my brother’s room. My brother had cut his finger. His finger had a lot of blood. I called my mother and told her what had happened. She told me she would rush home immediately. When my mother came home, she cleaned my brother’s finger with antiseptic and bandaged it. She praised me for being helpful.

Ending 1: "You're my honest son," my mother praised me and I was glad I was able to help my brother.~ Nur Dhamirah

Ending: I quickly dialled her number and while I was waiting for her to answer the call, I thought I had no clue as to what to do while she was on her way home. Suddenly, I heard my mother’s voice. “Mom, Nathan…" I stopped speaking because I was interrupted with fits of laughter. I spun around in confusion. It was my brother who was laughing. He giggled again then told me," Sissy I have no cut on my finger! See!"